Friday 27 October 2017

Your fragrance- a bouquet of Memories

Day 27: The scent of a flower

Attempted poetry form : Haiku

I don't know, but I have tried this form earlier but somehow the essence was not coming through my compositions. The prompt today made me attempt this once again since with the fragrance of roses I always remember my grandmother who was a lady par excellence! I would always love her and those wonderful memories would be cherished as long as I breathe!

My humble attempt:

A bunch of wild roses blooming 
The air still resplendent with your fragrance
Memories cascade down my eyes (tired)

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7 comments:

  1. Dawn D McKenzie27 October 2017 at 13:55

    I like the feelings brought by your poem. Especially "The air still resplendent with your fragrance"

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  2. Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost 27 October 2017 at 14:00

    My paternal grandmother's house smelled of cedar and mothballs, which was overwhelming the first time I visited at age ten. I came to love that smell over the years. My grandmother was a very obsessive person and could be maddening, but I loved her and wish I could see her one more time.
    It's hard as life goes on and we lose our loved ones. My eyes are tired too.

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  3. Annis Cassells27 October 2017 at 20:59

    Yes, that middle line captures it. Thank you. xoA

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  4. Tamara Woods30 October 2017 at 07:24

    I think you definitely tapped into the essence of a haiku here. Absolutely lovely.

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  5. Tamara Woods30 October 2017 at 17:53

    I think you definitely tapped into the essence of a haiku here. Absolutely lovely.

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  6. Amrita Paul30 October 2017 at 22:35

    Thank you all for taking time out and stopping by. This means a lot to me :-)

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