Monday, 30 October 2017

My compositions for Days 30 and 29- OctPoWriMo2017

Day 30: Forbidden

Well, not following the poetry form today as want to wander a bit before settling down. While taking a stroll  and contemplating on what to write, came across a tiny sapling emerging from a concrete slab covering the ground . The image kept haunting me till I penned down the lines below:

A rebel!

The tiny sapling pierced walls of concrete
Prohibited from emerging
She was crowned the princess with Wings!


Day 29: Still bent on tiny compositions . I remember after a long spell of rain when the skies cleared and the rays of Sun emerged , I gasped at the beauty as I looked up at the sky! I still get goosebumps as I recall that moment! Hence, my idea was born for this poem:


Stunned !

The warm rays kissed my cold lips
Nimbus clouds dissolved
Your ardent love took my breath away!

5 comments:

  1. I like your stunned poem! It can be read with many different intentions, so it probably works well for many!

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  2. I especially liked the feisty first poem. Thank you. xoA

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  3. dynamite comes in small packages. this is one of those times. nicely done!

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  4. Thank you all for the lovely comments. I am encouraged to pursue this journey all the more:-) Love :-)

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