Tuesday, 13 October 2015

The Inspiration

#OctPoWriMo: Poetry prompt 13 - Risky Business

Wow, this was an amazing experience. Tried composing a Blitz poem to the best of my abilities. It was quite challenging , but intriguing as well.

Rebel – yes that’s what everyone called her,
Rebel she was ever since,
Since the agony she faced
Since the torment she witnessed
Witnessed the toil of the heart
Witnessed the dreams fall apart
Apart has she torn herself
Apart from her tumultuous past
Past has taught her well
Past did not allow her to dwell
Dwell she did on her future
Dwell she did on the life ahead
Ahead she went
Ahead she took risks
Risks that gave her experiences
Risks that made her wise
Wise were the decisions she made
Wise steps influenced her life
Life changed
Life sparkled
Sparkled with the long lost happiness
Sparkled with gladness
Gladness that she hoped was long lasting
Gladness that spread its wings
Wings that took her far and wide
Wings that brought light
Light was all that she needed
Light that illuminated
Illuminated the lives of all others – like her
Illuminated them forever
Forever will she reside in their minds
Forever will she ignite
Ignite rebel- for the better
Ignite the fire pressed under the cinder
Cinder the thoughts that make you weak
Cinder the moments that depress you
You are the maker of your own destiny
You are unique
Unique is sublime
Unique is beautiful
Beautiful must be the intention
Beautiful – she said, needless to mention
Mention her – they did
Mention her inspiration
Inspiration she was to many
Inspiration she gave to me
Me- yes, I am her shadow
Me- yes, I am her soul
Soul – imperishable
Like hope.


Amrita Paul ( 13th Oct ’15)

12 comments:

  1. Bravo for trying this difficult form ... you wrote it very well! Bastet

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  2. Thank you so much :-) , really appreciate your encouragement.

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  3. Awesome flow. Loved the way you weaved these form :)

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  4. sweet words to someone special.

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  5. This was the first time I'd written a blitz poem as well. Because of the requirements, it's almost a given that the poems will be deep and complex. Your poem certainly is both.

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    1. Thank you so much, really value your feedback :-)

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