#OctPoWriMo: Poetry prompt 13 - Risky Business
Wow, this was an amazing experience. Tried composing a Blitz poem to the best of my abilities. It was quite challenging , but intriguing as well.
Wow, this was an amazing experience. Tried composing a Blitz poem to the best of my abilities. It was quite challenging , but intriguing as well.
Rebel – yes
that’s what everyone called her,
Rebel she was
ever since,
Since the
agony she faced
Since the
torment she witnessed
Witnessed the
toil of the heart
Witnessed the
dreams fall apart
Apart has she
torn herself
Apart from
her tumultuous past
Past has
taught her well
Past did not
allow her to dwell
Dwell she did
on her future
Dwell she did
on the life ahead
Ahead she went
Ahead she
took risks
Risks that gave
her experiences
Risks that
made her wise
Wise were the
decisions she made
Wise steps
influenced her life
Life changed
Life sparkled
Sparkled with
the long lost happiness
Sparkled with
gladness
Gladness that
she hoped was long lasting
Gladness that
spread its wings
Wings that
took her far and wide
Wings that
brought light
Light was all
that she needed
Light that
illuminated
Illuminated
the lives of all others – like her
Illuminated
them forever
Forever will
she reside in their minds
Forever will
she ignite
Ignite rebel-
for the better
Ignite the
fire pressed under the cinder
Cinder the
thoughts that make you weak
Cinder the
moments that depress you
You are the
maker of your own destiny
You are
unique
Unique is
sublime
Unique is beautiful
Beautiful must
be the intention
Beautiful –
she said, needless to mention
Mention her –
they did
Mention her
inspiration
Inspiration
she was to many
Inspiration
she gave to me
Me- yes, I am
her shadow
Me- yes, I am
her soul
Soul – imperishable
Like hope.
Amrita Paul (
13th Oct ’15)
Bravo for trying this difficult form ... you wrote it very well! Bastet
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :-) , really appreciate your encouragement.
ReplyDeleteAwesome flow. Loved the way you weaved these form :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sunita :-)
Deletesweet words to someone special.
ReplyDeleteYes, :-)
DeleteInspiring!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :-)
Deletebeautifully crafted. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :-)
DeleteThis was the first time I'd written a blitz poem as well. Because of the requirements, it's almost a given that the poems will be deep and complex. Your poem certainly is both.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, really value your feedback :-)
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